http://www.rashamwrites.com/journey/innocence-and-experience-my-date-with-a-vampire The Work of Rasham Nassar Mon, 30 Aug 2010 05:37:05 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.rashamwrites.com/journey/innocence-and-experience-my-date-with-a-vampire/comment-page-1#comment-227 Mario Savioni Sun, 04 Oct 2009 10:50:32 +0000 http://www.rashamwrites.com/?p=327#comment-227 That was excellent, brilliant. What made the competent descriptions powerful, were statements like: "Win the prize of my life...." There were just a few times that I thought, coined phrases, like "Smiled dangerously" gave me pause and that was, in this case, because when one smiles how we smile is not dangerous, but rather the smile itself evokes danger. I could be wrong. Please correct me. Otherwise, very powerful devices are the repeating of the surrender, word-for-word and yet at a point I got the point and perhaps an abbreviated version would be better the first time you repeat, since the second time you did it, I enjoyed the same length, perhaps because it had followed another brilliant device, which is the metaphorical aspect of the decay of humanity and it's replacement by something much more ominous but also much more sensitive to the natural environment, more alive, much less slovenly and this was the aspect of life's purpose. And so you took us on a circle trail at night and we learned while being afraid and not so afraid since you too question death for the sake of feeling. Great writing. P.S. - Sorry, forgot to tell you great post! That was excellent, brilliant. What made the competent descriptions powerful, were statements like: “Win the prize of my life….” There were just a few times that I thought, coined phrases, like “Smiled dangerously” gave me pause and that was, in this case, because when one smiles how we smile is not dangerous, but rather the smile itself evokes danger. I could be wrong. Please correct me. Otherwise, very powerful devices are the repeating of the surrender, word-for-word and yet at a point I got the point and perhaps an abbreviated version would be better the first time you repeat, since the second time you did it, I enjoyed the same length, perhaps because it had followed another brilliant device, which is the metaphorical aspect of the decay of humanity and it’s replacement by something much more ominous but also much more sensitive to the natural environment, more alive, much less slovenly and this was the aspect of life’s purpose. And so you took us on a circle trail at night and we learned while being afraid and not so afraid since you too question death for the sake of feeling. Great writing.
P.S. – Sorry, forgot to tell you great post!

]]> http://www.rashamwrites.com/journey/innocence-and-experience-my-date-with-a-vampire/comment-page-1#comment-226 Mario Savioni Sun, 04 Oct 2009 02:38:44 +0000 http://www.rashamwrites.com/?p=327#comment-226 That was excellent, brilliant. What made the competent descriptions powerful, were statements like: "Win the prize of my life...." There were just a few times that I thought, coined phrases, like "Smiled dangerously" gave me pause and that was, in this case, because when one smiles how we smile is not dangerous, but rather the smile itself evokes danger. I could be wrong. Please correct me. Otherwise, very powerful devices are the repeating of the surrender, word-for-word and yet at a point I got the point and perhaps an abbreviated version would be better the first time you repeat, since the second time you did it, I enjoyed the same length, perhaps because it had followed another brilliant device, which is the metaphorical aspect of the decay of humanity and it's replacement by something much more ominous but also much more sensitive to the natural environment, more alive, much less slovenly and this was the aspect of life's purpose. And so you took us on a circle trail at night and we learned while being afraid and not so afraid since you too question death for the sake of feeling. Great writing. That was excellent, brilliant. What made the competent descriptions powerful, were statements like: “Win the prize of my life….” There were just a few times that I thought, coined phrases, like “Smiled dangerously” gave me pause and that was, in this case, because when one smiles how we smile is not dangerous, but rather the smile itself evokes danger. I could be wrong. Please correct me. Otherwise, very powerful devices are the repeating of the surrender, word-for-word and yet at a point I got the point and perhaps an abbreviated version would be better the first time you repeat, since the second time you did it, I enjoyed the same length, perhaps because it had followed another brilliant device, which is the metaphorical aspect of the decay of humanity and it’s replacement by something much more ominous but also much more sensitive to the natural environment, more alive, much less slovenly and this was the aspect of life’s purpose. And so you took us on a circle trail at night and we learned while being afraid and not so afraid since you too question death for the sake of feeling. Great writing.

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